Monday, August 6, 2012

What Skeleton is Rattling in Your Closet? by Jennifer Faye

This post came to me as I was hit with a set of editor-suggested revisions for my latest story. I noticed a similarity between this set of revisions and the ones I previously completed for another story.

The biggest thing I noticed was that I had laid the ground work for my H/h’s backstories, I’d hinted at it, I’d teased about it, but I failed to swing open that closet door and let their skeletons and the ghosts that haunt them into the full sunlight.

It was all there in my head. I’d plotted and outlined. Their backstories were all neatly filed away, but I failed to put it on the page. <sigh>

I think perhaps I was hesitant because I’ll admit it. <raising hand> Hi, my name is Jennifer. And I’m a recovering contest junkie. There I publicly admit it. *G* Anyway while I was entering contest after contest, I heard a lot of “too much backstory.” I’m betting a lot of you have heard the same.

The thing is the comment was meant for the opening chapter, which is the average length of an entry in a writing contest. However, if you hear something long enough, I think it subconsciously sticks in your brain. For myself, I must have computed: backstory = bad.

Not true!

I’ve got to retrain my brain into believing that the pertinent part of a character’s backstory is my friend—in reasonable proportions. However, keep in mind that you don’t want to bog down the reader in the opening chapter. But you want to disperse the background information as it pertains to the character in their current situation.

Our backstories mold each one of us. Think about your past and how it affects the decisions you make today. For example: if you hated peas as a child but you were made to sit at the dinner table until your plate was picked clean, even if it meant sitting there for hours, you probably don’t eat peas even now as adult. Even though as you’ve grown and matured and most likely your tastes did too, I’d be willing to bet you still don’t like peas. The mere reminder of being miserable at the dinner table will keep you from giving those green little marbles a second chance. Sure, this is a simplistic example but you see what I’m saying. Your past is always with you and will in some way help influence your future.

However, a good friend of mine reminded me to mention that as well as the skeletons, you should not forget the importance of a character’s Ghost—the unhealed part of the backstory, which is going to directly influence your story. These are the things the H/h long to keep hidden and will do everything in their power to hide, but you must unearth them if the reader is to understand and sympathize with them and their choices.

For example, Casablanca’s ghost is Rick’s affair with Ilse. NOT his backstory of being a gun runner.

Not all backstory is equal!

It’s the stuff that will make a difference that you want on the page.

So don’t be afraid of those ghosts in the closet—at least not the ones belonging to your H/h. *G* Embrace them. Swing open that closet door and air out those ghosts. They are your friends. They will help make your H/h into well-rounded characters. They will provide motivation for the H/h actions. And they will provide you with a beginning for your character arc.

BTW, this is my very first blog entry. Hope you enjoyed it.

16 comments:

  1. Great post and a very interesting topic, Jennifer! I think just about anyone can relate to the plight of backstory and placement - especially with those first chapters where it's a knee jerk reaction to just put it all out there. Good luck with your revisions:-)

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    1. Thanks Olivia! Backstory is tricky. I'm trying to add it like I would salt. A dash here and there to add flavor to the story but not so much that it overpowers everything. Hopefully I've got the right balance.

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  2. The amount of backstory you write in a story and where you place it is a fine line, Jennifer. Makes me think about my current WIP . . . I don't think I have their 'skeletons' in either!

    Great post, BTW.

    Abbi :-)

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    1. Thanks! Wasn't sure what I'd blog about until I got my revision letter. Just seemed to fall into place. And yes, it's a very fine line. Hope you get the right mix in your story.

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  3. Yay Jennifer. Great first post (or even 100th post). I agree. Backstory is best after we care a little about who's telling it. I don't like strangers on the bus giving me their backstory (ping! "Excuse, me this is my stop") but I love to hear backstories of my friends. I think it's a question of if I know you, I'll want to know more about you. If I don't, I don't.

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    1. Hi! Thanks for stopping by. And I hear you about caring about the characters before you delving deeply into their backgrounds/motivations. Such a balancing act. Hope I got it right.

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  4. Great first blog post! I think a lot of us struggle with this issue.

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    1. Hi, Rachel! Thanks so much for stopping by. Glad you liked the post. :o)

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  5. Great post, Jennifer! I struggle with this as well. All the time. I think your adding it like 'salt' is a great strategy! Good luck with those revisions, I'm sure you'll do a great job! :-)

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    1. Victoria, so glad you came to visit! :-) It's good to know I'm not alone in my struggles. The revisions are coming along at a decent pace. Now I'm anxious to type them up and see where I stand. Hope your new story is going well.

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  6. Congratulations on your first post, Jennifer! Backstory is something I struggle with, too. I definitely study how other writers handle it. In skillful hands, backstory comes at just the right time and is a pleasure to read. Good luck with your revisions! :-)

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    1. Thanks, Natalie! I too pay attention to how other writers apply backstory and some make it look so easy. Right now, I'm afraid I'm layering it on too thick...BUT coming from someone who barely had any on the page, I'm guessing that would be a natural worry. LOL. Guess I'll find out soon enough.

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  7. Congrats on your first blog entry, Jennifer. And I thoroughly enjoyed it. I smiled at your 'recovering contest junkie' remark. I totally agree that inputting backstory is a balancing act. Fingers crossed for those revisions. :-)

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Linds! Thrilled you enjoyed it and that I was able to make you smile. :o)

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  8. Yep - I too agree that backstory is a balancing act of the highest proportions! Brilliant post :-)

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    1. Hey Michelle, thanks for reading my post! Yep, it's definitely a balancing act. You don't want to bore the reader, but you want the reader to feel connected to the H/h.

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